Board Meeting (6)
We need to film / record some more between Emma and Josh, in order to make our thriller flow better and also to make it longer. Here is what we need to add:
- The fight between Josh and Emma (record visuals and audio for flexibility when editing.)
- Emma shouting after Josh is taken "Oh My God- Help!"etc (voice recording only)
- An extra scene that takes place after Josh is taken. Between Josh and the Hidden Figure (whose identity is still mostly secret) - the audience initially thinks that this is Josh being held against his will, but after him and the Hidden Figure have a conversation, it becomes evident that Josh is not trapped - he is there voluntarily. (record visuals and audio, again, for flexibility when editing.)
First Draft of Argument
Emma: Josh you're too protective! You can't expect me to never leave the house by myself. You don't control my entire life!
Josh: But, but I have to keep you safe Emma! You don't understand! Someone has to protect you!
Emma: I can take care of myself!
Josh: I am just worried about you!
Emma: You know what. I'm done. Just forget it Josh, I'm leaving.
Josh: No! You can't leave! I won't let you!
Emma: I'm serious Josh. I'm not coming back this time.
Josh: Please, someone's out there. You're not safe! Please!
Emma slams the door.