Board Meeting (3): Final Idea Adjustments

After taking into consideration the audience feedback that we gathered, we have made the final adjustments to our thriller opening.

OPENING:

- Josh's voiceover explaining what's happening on screen - slips up, shows he's lying about what happened e.g: says he wasn't there while he is on screen clearly there at a different time that he said - throws up why is he lying?

- Josh is mentally ill

- stages fight between him and his girlfriend (Emma)

- Emma walks out

- hidden figure follows her

- Emma screams at Josh

- Josh disappears

PLOT (if the film was created):

- Josh stages it because he's mentally ill

- wants to see how much Emma loves him

- Stalks her after he disappears

- makes fake profiles

- she falls in love with one of the fake profiles

- meets 'Hal' - his fake profile

- turns out it's Josh